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nice drawing

The sound was so bad. You really should listen to it before you submit, the levels are way off. One part is so quiet that I have to turn my speakers up, and then it's blasting loud. Get some kind of balance. Besides that, it was a really corny joke, and the annoying girl went on way too long. I understand you wanted to drive in the fact that she was annoying, but really, that was way too long for such a crappy joke. Aside from that, you can really draw, but you aren't really animating much. Most of the time there was no movement on the screen, maybe a mouth movement. This could have been a comic and have been just as good. Well, if it was a comic I wouldn't have had to listen to the horrible sound so it would have been much better.

good artwork

The story was awful. I guess if you're psychotic you think that killing someone is just punishment for getting hit with a snowball, but I really don't think it's funny, if anything sick, but this wasn't even sick, mostly just dumb. I think you could make really good movies if you changed the writing from goth/emo rubbish, and made something that wasn't going out of it's way to be dark.

It's a FAKE!!

Yeah, It's a PARODY! It's funny how so many people here think that you were trying to post a video of you playing, when it's clear that you put the guitar down and drive a car and smash the guitar before the song is over, of course it's a fake. I thought it was pretty funny. It's a shame you really smashed that guitar, was it already broke or something? My inner cheap person is crying for the waste of consumer electronics.

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This looks really cool, but it is so incomplete as of now. The main problem I had was with split tiles. They were always raised when I set them, and the ones I used gave me the grass on the wrong side of the tile. The controls for the map are a little tough, it would be nice if when you push the left arrow the visible area went left, not the map. Also, the scroll thing when you click on the map would be nice to be able to move around with the mouse. I really think this could be neat, but right now it feels like playing something that isn't done, which is what it is.

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Why do a soundboard? I really don't understand it. Well, for lack of anything else, I'd say graphics 0 because nothing happens, style 0 because soundboards suck, sound 0 because you just game me clips of lines I've heard 100 times anyway, violence 0 because there was none, interactivity 2... because I feel like it, humor 0 because this wasn't funny, overall 0 because that's the median score of all of them.

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I liked it a lot. When I saw myself as an asteroid, I laughed a little. I liked the twist on it, very creative.